I just want to see how my English is improving. Eventually, I started loving English. It became a course out of the burdens. I hope that one day, English will just be a piece of cake for me.
Below is the sample of the essay that I made on my exercise about paragraphs. I was asked to say something about the work art that has a great impact on me.
Art is subjective. The interpretation of a work of art varies on who criticizes it. A work of art may be offensive or inspiring, but the true meaning of an art will always be on the beholder.
Lady Gaga is one of the artists that I admire, and her work of art that profoundly affects me is Judas. Many people find it offensive, but I find it beautiful. A beautiful work of art for me is full of emotions and conveying reality. My interpretation of the song is that people always or often say the name of god, but they do things against his will. It is true that they love god, but they also love committing sin.
Even though many people are against Lady Gaga, I still admire her. I admire how she express her freedom through the work of art.
I hope that our instructor will like, at least if not love, the essay that I made. I believe that my essay is a college-level essay.
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